*Bell Ringer:
Analysis vs. summary:
need to print out a copy of your body paragraphs first
*You need two
colors of highlighters or one highlighter and one colored pencil.
*Find the
Summary vs. Analysis handout to use as notes (extras in folder if needed)
*Highlight
everything that you feel is summary in one color, everything that is analysis
in another color
*Meet with me
(bring your highlighted copy)
—Work on
changing from first draft to second draft, getting your analysis to be at least
two times more than your summary (if not 3), adding more analysis, depth of
analysis (not just that it proves your thesis, but WHY and HOW)
*Writer’s Workshop:
*Work on
revising for craft comments,
editing
*Issues
noticed: Introduction information (fluency through intro, leading to thesis), unity when
supporting thesis (topic sentences), depth of analysis (keeping analysis tied
to topic sentences and thesis)
*Editing
noticed: academic voice;
italicize long works; citation format; general conventions; comma issues;
sentence fluency; sentence structure
*Examples of analysis, intros,
conclusions (from google
drive)
*One Pager
Presentations on Thursday: Use time to work on this only if your paper is
coming along well (you are at least done with a second draft of intro, body,
and conclusion)
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