Friday, Jan. 18 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: make sure project is sent to me as well as your self/peer evaluations

*Presentations:

*Mikayla

*Faith

*Gabe

*Austin/Reed

*Michael

*Rhiannan

*Connor

3rd Block

Jillian/Autumn

Hannah

Clayton

Emma

Have a great second semester!

Thursday, Jan. 17

*Bell Ringer: make sure project is sent to me as well as your self/peer evaluations

*Presentations:

*Belle/Olivia, Brooke/Ellie, Shilo, Lauren, Austin L, Jared, Dane/Austin, Garrett, Amanda, Caley

*Abby, Michael/Anthony/Jacob, Raisa, Thor/Seth, Savanna,

*If time, we continue on…

*Mikayla, Faith, Gabe, Austin/Reed, Michael, Rhiannan, Connor

*Jillian/Autumn, Hannah, Clayton, Emma

Wednesday, Jan. 16 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: Finish ACT Reading

*Discuss ACT info

*Presentation Work Time

*Self (and peer if applicable) evaluation should be shared with me Thursday or Friday (at the absolute latest)

*Presentations: (this is the order list randomizer gave me, if anyone wants to volunteer to go earlier, let me know)

*1st: Lexi, Ally, Grace, Kate, Belle/Olivia, Brooke/Ellie,

*Tomorrow and Friday: Shilo, Lauren, Austin L, Jared, Dane/Austin, Garrett, Amanda, Caley, Amy, Mikayla, Faith, Gabe, Austin/Reed, Michael, Rhiannan, Connor

*Abby, Michael/Anthony/Jacob, Raisa, Thor/Seth, Savanna, Jillian/Autumn, Sheldon, Hannah, Clayton, Emma

Tuesday, Jan. 15 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: Paper collection (order: rubric, paper (works cited page last page of paper) –paper clipped together)

*Presentation work time

*Time it when you practice –tell me the time after you have run through it at least twice out loud

*22/11 projects to present –need to know times

*Order of presentations (volunteers and then random.org for rest of list):

*Peer Evaluation (partners) and Self Evaluation –due by Friday

*PRACTICE GIVING PRESENTATION

*ACT Prep: Reading

*Tomorrow (1st block): Lexi, Ally, Grace, Kate, Belle/Olivia, Brooke/Ellie, Shilo, Lauren, Austin L, Jared, Dane/Austin, Garrett, Amanda, Amy, Caley, Mikayla, Faith, Gabe, Austin/Reed, Michael, Rhiannan, Connor

Monday, Jan. 14 Agenda

*Presentation work time (if your paper is in its third draft form)

*Writer’s Workshop –FINAL DAY IN CLASS!!!!

*Reminders on paper:

*Work cited page

*Rubric check

*Support thesis throughout

*At this point, you should be working on second draft of ENTIRE paper or even possibly your third draft

*You need to self edit.  I am not reading and looking for grammar/spelling/punctuation –YOU NEED TO DO THIS!!!!!

*Print out your paper for self editing (if you want to highlight for summary and analysis, it could be helpful)

*Have someone else read your paper and help you out.*** 

*You need to take the time to critically look at your paper, checking for analysis vs. summary, depth of analysis, fluency and word choice specifically

*Only information in your story that directly ties to quote given and thesis!! Don’t just tell what happens in the story UNLESS IT CONNECTS TO THE DIRECT QUOTE!

*If you have met with me, work on the issues I brought up with you as you revise.  If you haven’t met with me, you should still be revising, but focus on your self revisions and editing!

Friday, Jan. 11 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: ACT English Test Examples (search ACT Practice Tests)

*http://www.act.org/content/act/en/products-and-services/the-act/test-preparation/english-practice-test-questions.html?page=0&chapter=0

*Work Time on presentation and/or paper

*Meet with me when called up or if you have other questions

*Reminders on paper:

*Work cited page

*Rubric check

*Support thesis throughout

*Print out your paper for self editing (if you want to highlight for summary and analysis, it could be helpful)

*Have someone else read your paper and help you out.*** 

*You need to take the time to critically look at your paper, checking for analysis vs. summary, depth of analysis, fluency and word choice specifically

*Only information in your story that directly ties to quote given and thesis!! Don’t just tell what happens in the story UNLESS IT CONNECTS TO THE DIRECT QUOTE!

Thursday, Jan. 10 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: Works Cited Page reminder (Anthology entry) –shared with you

*Writer’s Workshop

*Conferences NEED TO CONFER WITH ME TODAY, FRIDAY, or MONDAY (AT THE LATEST) –however the paper is still due on Tuesday

*Reminders on paper:

*Work cited page

*Rubric check

*Support thesis throughout

*You should be done with rough draft of ENTIRE paper

*If you are worried your paper is too long…the average for this paper is between 6 and 10 pages

*You need to self edit.  I am not reading the whole paper looking for grammar/spelling/punctuation –YOU NEED TO DO THIS!!!!!

*Have someone else read your paper and help you out. 

*You need to take the time to critically look at your paper, checking for analysis vs. summary, depth of analysis, fluency and word choice specifically

*You need to take the time to critically look at your paper, checking for analysis vs. summary, depth of analysis, fluency and word choice specifically

*Only information in your story that directly ties to quote given and thesis!! Don’t just tell what happens in the story UNLESS IT CONNECTS TO THE DIRECT QUOTE!

*If you have met with me, work on the issues I brought up with you as you revise.  If you haven’t met with me, you should still be revising, but focus on your self revisions and editing!

Monday, Jan. 7 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: “To a Mouse” (where the title of the book comes from)

*Read through all TQE posts on Edublogs: any additional ideas to discuss? 

*Assessment tomorrow: need two themes with two pieces of evidence each

*Summary vs. Analysis –find this handout and re-read it

*Work on Body paragraphs

*Remember to follow TIQA while writing, or at least remember to analyze each quote –explain why/how it proves your point

*Each body paragraph should have at least 2 quotes with in-text citations. 

*No first person pronouns! (unless in a direct quote)

*If you finish your body paragraphs, work on your introduction

*When you have a draft that you are ready to confer about, upload it to Turnitin and sign up for a conference for tomorrow.

*Remember, Turnitin doesn’t update in real time, so only upload it when you aren’t going to work on it more (and you have all of your body paragraphs drafted)

*PUT YOUR THESIS AS THE FIRST SENTENCE OF YOUR PAPER (unless you have written an intro, in which case, the thesis should be the last line of the intro)

*Ind. Book Presentation work time

*If you haven’t worked on this in a bit and you have a few paragraphs of the rough draft done, I would suggest working on this for a chunk of time

*Final Blog comments due before the day turns to Tuesday!!!

Friday, Jan. 4 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: Writer’s Workshop

*Today you should be finishing your outline (if you haven’t yet) and then starting the rough draft of your body paragraphs

*Each main point on the outline should have at least 2 quotes with in-text citations. 

*Your goal is to fully prove your complete thesis with in-depth analysis for BOTH stories: you should be proving a similar theme, potentially other similarities, and contrasting the stories either only through era characteristics, or also through theme treatment

*Most of the papers will have the comparing be the theme and the contrasting be the era specifics, but the strongest papers will go more in-depth on both the theme and the era (potentially similarities and differences for both)

*Work on Body paragraphs

*Remember to follow TIQA while writing, or at least remember to analyze each quote –explain why/how it proves your point

*Each body paragraph should have approx. 2 quotes with in-text citations.

*End of book discussion with small group

*Share annotations from Wednesday night/yesterday (if you didn’t finish yesterday)

*Steinbeck’s craft of writing (Foreshadowing, Figurative Language, Symbolism, Tragic Hero, structure of novel, purpose of characters, effects of conflicts, etc.) -talk about these things, maybe use some for your Es

*Post TQE for end of book –sections 5 and 6 or book overall (on the white boards)

*Make sure for American Dream and one of your other two big ideas that you have a theme connected to that idea and two pieces of textual evidence that show each one perfectly (WITH PAGE NUMBER)

*Big Idea Notes Sheet:

*To be prepared for the assessment on Tuesday you need:

*A theme (message) about the American Dream shown in the book and a theme (message about one of the other two ideas you traced

*Two pieces of evidence for each theme that you can analyze to develop your theme. MAKE SURE YOU HAVE PAGE NUMBERS AND TEXTUAL EVIDENCE WRITTEN DOWN ON A SHEET (CAN BE THE BIG IDEA SHEET OR ANOTHER)

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Thursday, Jan. 3 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: Read page 96-end together

*TQE Discussion on 5 and 6? Maybe tomorrow depending on time

*Open NOTE assessment, NOT open book –on Monday?

*Note-Taking and Outlining

*Work on figuring out theme/thesis, taking notes, and starting the outline

*Thesis check: your rough draft thesis must be checked by the end of the end of the hour at the absolute latest (rough draft thesis most likely will change)

*Outline Reminders

*Finish looking through the story, taking notes on how each shows themes, what literary ideas come up, how each shows its era (LOOK AT YOUR NOTES, I WILL NOT TELL YOU THE ERAS’ CHARACTERISTICS) –DEPTH OF THEME

*You should be done taking notes (re-reading, highlighting, actual notes) by end of class today (beginning of tomorrow at latest)

*Share a document (ON GOOGLE DOCS, if you haven’t/are making your outline on a different document) with me that is or will be your outline (Thesis through body paragraph section is what is due tomorrow).

*Final Paper thesis check and work time (paper or ind. book proj.)

*Hwk: Final blog post and outline

Wednesday, Jan. 2 Agenda

*Bell Ringer: Intro to Final Essay

*you should know of what stories you are analyzing and have copies of them by tomorrow (end of block)

*Rough Draft Thesis due by middle of block tomorrow

*Add your name to the list with the titles of the stories you are writing about (if you need a copy, talk to me)

*Work Time: themes, ideas for thesis: checked mid block tomorrow

*Finish Part 4 (74-83)

*TQE Discussion Pt. 4

*Hwk: Make sure you have finished your independent book and are posting your last post on your blog before it turns to Friday; thesis check tomorrow (if not today); Read Section 5 84-96 (stop after "...rubbed his bristly whiskers with his wrist stump.")

	Writer's Workshop Timeline	Wed. 2nd : Paper Introduced, get stories, work on thesis, find evidence Thesis Check (by end?), work on outline,	Thurs. 3rd : outline check (end of block –shared with me!!), work on body FINISH OMM in class	Fri. 4th : Notes on Intro/Conclusion, work on body, intro conclusion;
Mon. 7th: OMM Assessment Work on body, intro, conclusion	Tues 8th: Rough draft body checked by end today, work on intro/conclusion CONFER	Wed 9th: Work on intro/body/ conclusion CONFER	Thurs 10th: Intro/Conclusion Check (Whole draft done), work on revising CONFER	Fri 11th:  Revising CONFER
Mon 14th: Last day of work time (paper and presentation) CONFER	Tues 15th: Papers due	Wed 16th: Last day of worktime on presentations (some present first block?)	Thurs 17th: presentations	Fri. 18th: Presentations (end of semester)

*Assignment: Compare (how they show the same theme) and Contrast (how they show era/how they show theme differently) two selections from two different eras

*Selections: “The Trial of Thomas-Builds-the-Fire”, “The Law of Life”, “Yellow Wallpaper”

*Theme: ‘Cultural’ beliefs followed blindly destroying the individual?; Society silencing one who is different?

*Possible thesis: “The Trial of Thomas-Builds-the-Fire,” “The Law of Life”, and “The Yellow Wallpaper” embody the eras they were written in while emphasizing the idea that when society blindly follows the beliefs of the majority, individuals who don’t ‘fit’ are destroyed as well as displaying other similarities.

*Your thesis at this point is a ROUGH DRAFT!!  It can and most likely will change as you develop your body paragraphs