*Bell Ringer: One Pager Presentations (1st block)
*Writer’s Workshop:
*Work on revising for craft comments, editing
*Issues noticed: Introduction information (fluency through intro, leading to thesis), unity when supporting thesis (topic sentences), depth of analysis (keeping analysis tied to topic sentences and thesis); SYNTHESIS OF THE EXAMPLES
*Synthesis: presenting new ideas based on interpretations of other evidence or arguments; analysis of multiple sources together.
*Editing noticed: academic voice; italicize long works; citation format; general conventions; comma issues; sentence fluency; sentence structure
*Turning a second draft into a final reminders
*punctuation, capitalization, academic voice, format, other grammar or conventions; fluency, sentence structure (fragment, run-on, comma splice)
*Meet with me to confer on comments
*YOU NEED A WORKS CITED PAGE
*Paper due Wednesday!!
*Crucible Web: If you were not happy with your score (remember, it is in as an assessment), you can add more connections/more details on the ones you have. If you are doing that, you need to get the corrections/additions AND the rubric in to me by MONDAY!
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