Friday, Nov. 1 Agenda

• Bell Ringer: ONE PAGERS
• Writer’s Workshop: 
• Work on revising for craft comments, editing (I haven’t read through EXACTLY for editing, but I did notice stuff…)
• Issues noticed: unity when supporting thesis (topic sentences), depth of analysis (keeping analysis tied to topic sentences and thesis)
• Editing noticed: academic voice; italicize long works; citation format; general conventions; comma issues; sentence fluency; sentence structure
• Intro, Conclusion, Body Examples
• Introduction information (fluency through intro, leading to thesis),
• Turning a second draft into a final reminders
• punctuation, capitalization, academic voice, format, other grammar or conventions; fluency, sentence structure (fragment, run-on, comma splice)
• Meet with me to confer on comments
• YOU NEED A WORKS CITED PAGE 
• Paper due Wednesday!!